It Could be You

once in your life you will meet someone who will make you smile

but since you can’t be good enough for him, you’ve no choice butย  to sigh

all your efforts to please him turned out to be guile

just a look or a smile from him makes your heart soar up high

3 Comments on It Could be You

  1. prakash
    June 25, 2012 at 10:52 pm (9 years ago)

    This is one of your shortest poems. One that took me some time to understand.

    I pondered over these questions:
    How can the woman consider her efforts to be GUILE? Was she simply not sincere?
    Was it a distorted view of herself she had in the end? Or rather, was that the perception the man had in his mind about her?

    A lively poem.

  2. Audrey
    June 26, 2012 at 1:31 am (9 years ago)

    Hi Prakash,
    I actually don’t remember my state of mind when I composed that short poem. ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. prakash
    June 26, 2012 at 2:52 am (9 years ago)

    Sometimes it takes me some time to understand simple things, hehehe. …Nothing more ๐Ÿ™‚


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